Talk:Game Story

A young gazelle comes out of the woods after the boss is beaten. [NOTE: Gazelle... in the forest??]

• I recommend just using a young deer instead... Really, Gazelles don't live in forests. --J0nnJ0nes 16:47, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

young Gazelle: "I may be able to help you. Lately, it seems as if the beasts have been coming from the Rainbow." [NOTE: "the Rainbow" needs a better name... Nethergate? Nexus?]

• Rainbow ... Not the coolest name for a level. How about the Spectrum, Nexus, Nethergate? --J0nnJ0nes 16:47, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

They run into a strange robot that seemed to purposely be freezing the entire city to make it all inhospitable. As a result, there are no people in the entire city. The boss can freeze a character solid, and attempts to do so before fighting it. [Note: Why are there robots? Who built them? I thought it was about magic? Why not an ice elemental?]

• Why are there robots if it's all supposed to be magic-based? Why not try Ice Elemental, Ice Golem, Ice Yeti, etc.? --J0nnJ0nes 16:47, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

Gimacian the Dark: "Yes ... Neon is at the mercy of 12 bloodthirsty dragons. They're under my control, and if you try to kill me, they will rip Neon apart!" [Note: When Gimacian dies, they're triggered to? Or when he commands them to somehow? Killing? Is it a good message to spread? No one and nothing ever died in the original Sonic games.]

• How does it work exactly then? --J0nnJ0nes 17:00, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

Surge: "I don't know, but we should probably explore this place. Maybe we'll find out exactly what Gimacian's after." [NOTE: I thought he was building a weapon out of what he was mining, not trying to dig up a pre-made scepter? Wasn't it supposed to be using magic, not machines?]

• There seems to be a conflict in the story, or at least some confusion... What does the Dimensional Scepter have to do with the Dimensional Rings? What is Gimacian after? What is being searched for or dug up by Gimacian? --J0nnJ0nes 17:00, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

Nega Neon is very powerful, much more than Neon, or even Surge. However, Nega-Neon is defeated by Neon, but only by a clever trick. It seems they are polar opposite in power levels as well, but in cleverness and intelligence too. [Note: Before, Nega-Neon was "... quite easily." ??? I thought the game became harder as you went along, not easier... Plus, this adds possibilities for future plots.]

• I changed this, but is it all right? --J0nnJ0nes 17:00, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

Neon: sighs, "I can FLY, you know!" [Story Note: Charge CAN glide, but only to a certain limit, much like skydivers with wingsuits. He still reaches terminal velocity eventually, which is fatal when hitting the ground. So, he can only glide from lower altitudes.]

• Just a clarification. Anyone have any arguments against this? --J0nnJ0nes 17:00, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

Gimacian is defeated, hanging off the ledge of a deep crevasse, where a tremendous waterfall flows [perhaps from all sides of the crevasse].

• I've changed this, but is it all right? --J0nnJ0nes 17:00, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

Charge: "Gimacian wasn't HALF the coward you are! You were so scared, you were hiding in ANOTHER DIMENSION! Surge and Neon might not be able to beat you, but I'm stronger than both of them!" [Note: Was he really hiding in another dimension? Or just taunting?]

• Is it this way? --J0nnJ0nes 17:00, 13 July 2010 (UTC)